I sense it feels good to "pen" this. As a reader, I'm getting a kick out of the tone. And there is a sentence that when I read it, makes me chuckle--last sentence in paragraph five: "Maybe he will largely be forgotten by election." The way the adverb "largely" splits the verb "will be." Which as a verb can be both auxiliary and a modal. …
I sense it feels good to "pen" this. As a reader, I'm getting a kick out of the tone. And there is a sentence that when I read it, makes me chuckle--last sentence in paragraph five: "Maybe he will largely be forgotten by election." The way the adverb "largely" splits the verb "will be." Which as a verb can be both auxiliary and a modal. And then the next paragraph begins, "Nah." The adverb could have been "mostly." But "largely" works better. As in this is "huge."
I sense it feels good to "pen" this. As a reader, I'm getting a kick out of the tone. And there is a sentence that when I read it, makes me chuckle--last sentence in paragraph five: "Maybe he will largely be forgotten by election." The way the adverb "largely" splits the verb "will be." Which as a verb can be both auxiliary and a modal. And then the next paragraph begins, "Nah." The adverb could have been "mostly." But "largely" works better. As in this is "huge."